Saturday, June 27, 2009

TASK 4 Cinderella from the POV of one of the step-sisters.

I have always been the evil sister in the Cinderella story.In fact i was actually the one with the heart of gold.I have another sister she was the one that was always bullying Cinderella. Actually i and cinderella were good sisters and friends since young , but everything change after her father died.I hated my mom for bullying Cinderella but i could not say anything.

There was one event that my evil mother spilled thoudsands of beans on the floor and told cinerella to pick it up before she could go to the ball.Later in the story cinderella called her animal friends to pick it up for her.Actually i was the one that called the animals to help her so she could go to the ball.
Cinderella had always hated me as she thought i was evil like all my family memebers.I was heart broken.I wanted to tell her how much i wanted to go back to the past and be like how we use to be.Later, Cinderella managed to go to the ball like i expected.I was happy for her.
Everyone did not regconise her but i did. She was my precious little sister.

There was a day that the prince came to my house to see who could fit into the shoe and be his wife. Actually i could fit into the shoe but i pretend that i could not and gave the shoe to Cinderella.I am happy that Cinderella married the prince.Now she wont have to suffer anymore.I regretted not telling her how much i love her as my mother would mistreat me.However i am still happy that she found her happiness.

1 comment:

  1. Show more in this story! Right now you have a tendency to tell me what happens. Describe the scenes and show me what happens. This makes a reader more connected to what you write.

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